Finished "Let Us Give Thanks"

It's been hanging over my head and nagging me. I hate having too many started projects and it was the first one to wrap up quickly. And I kept to the plans that I followed in my mind to to culmination....

Yeah, I'm fretting that it doesn't work. I know it's not my strongest writing in the Wars Are Won series, but that's not where my dissatisifaction stems from. I'm worried that my attempt with mystery derailed with my villian. The story didn't up being a mystery, instead more of suspense thriller. Well so did "Domestic Bliss," so I guess traditional mysteries with the Biker Mice just don't want to work. I'm worried I made Charley too weepy. And I think I need to scrap the whole thing and start over.

Not completely start over, there are scenes I like and think work. It's just when I add them together, I think the total is blah. But I'm not going to do anything until letting the beta readers have a go at it.

Now time to go concentrate on Canterbury Murder Mystery.

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