Better Now

Found the notes from the class workshop on the story.

1. Dialogue (all those "thou"s)


2. Pace


3. Contractions - Apostrophes in the wrong place.


4. Make Kate more badass - more backstory


5. Change ghost visualizations - more ambiguity


6. Kate's motivation for leaving the cross

I decided to push back the open to show the shipwreck actually taking place, and hoping that improves the pace. And a flashback to the Toby and Kate fight will hopefully pick up the pace. All I can do at this point is try.

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