With the slight problem of being too long. I haven't edited it yet, and I really don't know if it will be stronger by chopping off the bartender's exposition. If I did chop it off, I could probably add another line or two from the ghost to help point people in the direction of what inspired this story.
Time to check on the last load of clothes. I'll probably edit in the morning while getting the car fixed.
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Flash Fiction Contest Entry 1 - Finished
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Flash Fiction Contest Entry 2 - Finished
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